Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Object poem

Object Poem-Door Mat


Day by Day i get pased by on
I don't talk back unless spoken to
Bug and rodents hide all over me
I am turning grey
i am tired
no longer do i want to wait outside 247
during winter i am always wet
People are fat
once in a while they don't just walk inside the house
They just stand there on me for 20 minutes just talking about the devil child
He's the devil i swear all he does is spit on me
i am done
i am ready to give up
but i can't move
so i just have to wait tilll i tear

Monday, March 8, 2010

My Favorite Poem So Far

Hmmm if I had to pick which poem that we've read in Ms A.'s class would defiently be Shihans "This Type Love". I remember the first time i Read that poem. His words had a big meaning about love and some of the things being in love could do to you and the things that your going to be willing to give up. And actually watching him in person saying this is a sight fpr spre eyes. You don't want to stop looking and listening. He speaks, not like a stuck up person who's just tryna make a quick buck. But a real person who is in love and wants everyone to know what being in love is really like and the sacrafices you make when you hit a certain type of love. He uses many ways to show this and i consider them different types of metaphors since most of the poem consist of these. That is why "This Type Love" is my favorite poem so far